Thursday, October 9, 2014

Rhyme - Caty Beth Gooding

A Boat Beneath a Sunny Sky
BOAT beneath a sunny sky,                 A
Lingering onward dreamily                  B
In an evening of July —                                    A

Children three that nestle near,                       C
Eager eye and willing ear,                    C
Pleased a simple tale to hear —                       C

Long has paled that sunny sky:                        A
Echoes fade and memories die:                      A
Autumn frosts have slain July.                        A

Still she haunts me, phantomwise,      D
Alice moving under skies                     D
Never seen by waking eyes.                 D

Children yet, the tale to hear,               C
Eager eye and willing ear,                    C
Lovingly shall nestle near.                    C

In a Wonderland they lie,                     A
Dreaming as the days go by,                A
Dreaming as the summers die:                       A

Ever drifting down the stream —         E
Lingering in the golden gleam —         E
Life, what is it but a dream?                 E

Carroll, Lewis. "A Boat Beneath a Sunny Sky." Poetry Foundation. Poetry Foundation. Web. 9 Oct. 2014. <http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/173163>.
The rhyme scheme of this poem goes like this: ABA CCC AAA DDD CCC AAA EEE. The rhyme scheme seemed to me to create a rhythm and repetition that made the poem seem more desperate as it went on, maybe even made the narrator seem less sane. It gives a certain "this looks strangely familiar… that's because we've been here before" sort of feeling to the 

1 comment:

  1. The rhyme scheme I thought was going back to an original rhyme (A) to bring back unity and unify the ideas in the middle of the poem to the ideas at the beginning. Our mind connects sounds similar to the way we connect words and so by repeating the same rhyme later on we automatically think about the beginning, thus unifying the entire theme of the poem.

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